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Thanks, Sophie! Appreciate that 🙂

Thank you, Deanna!

Title: Trespasser
300 words
Firefighter/ Enchanted Forest / Crime/Thriller
By Vicky Hinault
Twitter: @staytrue_create
Yes, I am open to derivative works

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The yellow and black of the crime scene tape clashed against the lush greens of the trees laden with summer leaves that splintered shards of sunlight down onto the…[Read more]

This is a lovely succinct little story!

I loved this, Deanna! Great intensity builds throughout. Thanks for sharing. Great read!

Haha! Thank you 🙂

Nice read!

This is great, Sam. Very strong character work! Great read 🙂

I always like the bad guys to get what they deserve! 🙂

I loved this – had a noir feel to it the whole way! Great read!

Thank you, Jaime!

Thanks, Sam! Appreciate that 🙂

This was lovely, Some real heartfelt emotions were built into the flow of the story which grew so quickly and so subtly! Nicely done.

A super fun story! Nice twist on how Batman is normally viewed! thanks for sharing 🙂

This is great. Fantastic detail that really drew you into the story. I also like the social commentary.

This was a great read. I love the use of innocence as a detractor from the reveal. Thanks for sharing!

Thanks so much, Samantha! Was hoping to subvert expectations so I’m pleased it had the desired effect!

Thanks, Jaime! I appreciate that! 🙂

Wonderful emotion in this – it really made me feel fo him. Great use of 300 words!

Really like the play on the time flies phrase as it provoked a lot of thought in me! Great story.