lilyfinch

[Note from KM: story contains some explicit elements.]

Concert of Change
Teacher/Backstage at a Concert/Fantasy
297 words
Yes, I am open to derivative works.

All the while, Bon Jovi was belting out “O O Living On A Prayair” while the crowd joined in on the fun. I rocked it up backstage, waiting for his return so we could u k- like rab…[Read more]

This version is a mix of two different versions that pasted into the same document. Please omit the paragraph that begins “I was elated” until “card and was gone.” Thank you. LF6

It was scary and full of suspense. Way to go Mackey. LF6

Wow. Sombre and tragic; the villain triumphs. Great story. LF6

Witty and wild. Poor Iona, FL6

Love it. LF6

I am so very sorry for your loss.
But the story was awesome. Your randomly selected words in a spoof on French were great. Genius. LF6

Microcosms
300 Words
Perfumist/Different Languages/Drama
Lily Finch

The duty-free line at the airport was huge, filled with men waiting to be served. The perfumer, a polyglot, served each one.

The first man was from Spain.
Me gustaría comprarle un perfume a mi esposa. Creo que le gustaría mucho el perfume. Sé que ella está esperando en cas…[Read more]

Gerald, thanks for reading and commenting. I loved doing this one. LF6

Thanks for reading Deanna. Yes, I thought that line was pretty clever too. It seemed to get to the heart of both matters I was going for: the comedy and the actual crochet terminology. LOL.

Cool story Deanna. Well done. LF6

Whoa, that story is a freaky one Steve. Herr Doktor is evil. Yikes! Scary and mysterious. LF6

Gerald, I thought your version of the alien life snatcher learning how to crochet was given a life because of it was humorous. Well done. LF6. I enjoyed this very much.

UFOs and the Death of a Crochet Bag
300 words
Ancient God/Crochet Club/Comedy
Yes, I am open to derivative works.

Marjorie took her starting chain with her to heaven last week. Ancient God, rest her clown barf.” Barb stated, nodding her head respectfully.
“Her frog, or rip it, rip it, was her biggest claim to fame,” Lacie declared.
“Ye…[Read more]

Still, I enjoyed it! LF6

While I was captivated by the story it felt like it was a tiny bit forced. Other than that it was funny and engaging. You definitely captured the essence of an extreme ironer. The other elements here add to the absurdity. Nicely done. LF6

The scope of dialogue was as fitting as it is entertaining. Really loved how you got the prompt into this one. Well done. LF6

Nice twist at the end. And cool countdown. Nicely done. LF6

Enjoyed the “glorified toaster” and how you moulded the prompt into a great imaginative tale. Nicely done. LF6

Sarcasm reigns and truths abound in this one. Nicely done. Great take on the prompt. LF6