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JK commented on the post, Microcosms 100, on the site Microcosms 7 years, 2 months ago
Thank you, Alva! I agree! So many great ones like to see more to them or longer or versions.
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JK commented on the post, Microcosms 100, on the site Microcosms 7 years, 2 months ago
Beautiful story. Short and powerful.
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JK commented on the post, Microcosms 100, on the site Microcosms 7 years, 2 months ago
Hooked me at the title. Lovely story and descriptions. Beautiful ending – The artist had called it ‘Perfecting Grace’. She called it for love, and her old ocean eyes broke upon wrinkled cheeks.
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JK commented on the post, Microcosms 100, on the site Microcosms 7 years, 2 months ago
Love your usage of pulp throughout your story. I could feel for your character too. Great story, Alma.
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JK commented on the post, Microcosms 100, on the site Microcosms 7 years, 2 months ago
Wow, powerful message and beautifully written.
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JK commented on the post, Microcosms 100, on the site Microcosms 7 years, 2 months ago
Fun story and fun fact at the end. Good incorporation of 100th!
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JK commented on the post, Microcosms 100, on the site Microcosms 7 years, 2 months ago
Enjoyed your story and characters. Short and sweet, to the point!
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JK commented on the post, Microcosms 100, on the site Microcosms 7 years, 2 months ago
Prompts – Grace/ Cave/ Historical
Title – The Cave of Doom and the Three Wise Men
Word count – 100
Spelunking through caves shouldn’t take too long Grace thought, this is my tenth time. A few turns i […]
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JK commented on the post, Microcosms 100, on the site Microcosms 7 years, 2 months ago
Happy 100th Microcosm and great ideas! 100 words will be challenging!
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JK commented on the post, Microcosms 99, on the site Microcosms 7 years, 2 months ago
300 words
Astronaut; Plane; MemoirMy Almost Unfinished Space Memoir
Sometimes my life felt like a dream, other times my dreams felt like life. I suppose we can all say that. I am an old man now, not all […]
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JK commented on the post, Microcosms 98, on the site Microcosms 7 years, 2 months ago
Thank you, Sian for taking the time to read and comment. Any thoughts are helpful and appreciated in my writing journey!
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JK commented on the post, Microcosms 98, on the site Microcosms 7 years, 2 months ago
Thank you, Alma! I appreciate you reading and comments. Lots of wonderful entries and a lot to learn yet.
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JK commented on the post, RESULTS – Microcosms 98, on the site Microcosms 7 years, 2 months ago
Congratulations winners and Sian! Loved the entries!
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JK commented on the post, Microcosms 98, on the site Microcosms 7 years, 2 months ago
Enjoyed your story and usage of prompts.
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JK commented on the post, Microcosms 98, on the site Microcosms 7 years, 2 months ago
Great story and fun read!
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JK commented on the post, Microcosms 98, on the site Microcosms 7 years, 2 months ago
Fun twist to a fairy tale!
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JK commented on the post, Microcosms 98, on the site Microcosms 7 years, 2 months ago
Loved your story and how you used the elements. Fun to read.
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JK commented on the post, Microcosms 98, on the site Microcosms 7 years, 2 months ago
Great story, nice descriptions, and enjoyed your take on the prompts!
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