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jaim_ee commented on the post, Microcosms 215 + The Karen Cox Prize for Entertaining Short Fiction (Flash Fiction Contest), on the site 1 year, 3 months ago
That’s a good respin right there! Myth debunker!! Well handled!
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jaim_ee commented on the post, Microcosms 215 + The Karen Cox Prize for Entertaining Short Fiction (Flash Fiction Contest), on the site 1 year, 3 months ago
Love it! You always create something unique and witty.
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jaim_ee commented on the post, Microcosms 215 + The Karen Cox Prize for Entertaining Short Fiction (Flash Fiction Contest), on the site 1 year, 3 months ago
Thank you!
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jaim_ee commented on the post, Microcosms 215 + The Karen Cox Prize for Entertaining Short Fiction (Flash Fiction Contest), on the site 1 year, 3 months ago
Your style is so entertaining and I love the descriptions for the place names!
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jaim_ee commented on the post, Microcosms 215 + The Karen Cox Prize for Entertaining Short Fiction (Flash Fiction Contest), on the site 1 year, 3 months ago
How To Clear A Crowd
By Jaime Bree
299 words
Ice Sculptor/Retail Hell/PoemI’d started this job
Stacking shelves
The worst ever shift
Known as ‘Retail Hell’.
It wasn’t just busy,
Crowded or packed.
They were squashed like sardines
Don’t try to swing that…Handbag.
Of all of the things
I had to place
On display that…[Read more] -
jaim_ee commented on the post, Microcosms 215 + The Karen Cox Prize for Entertaining Short Fiction (Flash Fiction Contest), on the site 1 year, 3 months ago
Wow Eryn! Beautiful!
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jaim_ee commented on the post, Microcosms 215 + The Karen Cox Prize for Entertaining Short Fiction (Flash Fiction Contest), on the site 1 year, 3 months ago
Smiled all the way through this!
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jaim_ee commented on the post, Microcosms 214 + The Karen Cox Prize for Entertaining Short Fiction (Flash Fiction Contest), on the site 1 year, 3 months ago
Confined Projection
by Jaime Bree
296 words
Inmate/ Secret Research Facility/ Sci Fi/ Firefighter/ Ancient Library
Yes, I’m open to derivative works_________________________________________________
The book signing was slow, but she knew he’d come. Years of honing her skills had brought unwanted attention and although they’d locked h…[Read more]
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jaim_ee commented on the post, Microcosms 214 + The Karen Cox Prize for Entertaining Short Fiction (Flash Fiction Contest), on the site 1 year, 3 months ago
Great imagery
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jaim_ee commented on the post, Microcosms 214 + The Karen Cox Prize for Entertaining Short Fiction (Flash Fiction Contest), on the site 1 year, 3 months ago
Love it. I feel emotional reading towards the end.
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jaim_ee commented on the post, Microcosms 214 + The Karen Cox Prize for Entertaining Short Fiction (Flash Fiction Contest), on the site 1 year, 3 months ago
I love love love this very much! Perfect micro fairytale. You’ve really captured the essence!
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jaim_ee commented on the post, Microcosms 214 + The Karen Cox Prize for Entertaining Short Fiction (Flash Fiction Contest), on the site 1 year, 3 months ago
A great write. Unique! Well done!
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jaim_ee commented on the post, Microcosms 214 + The Karen Cox Prize for Entertaining Short Fiction (Flash Fiction Contest), on the site 1 year, 3 months ago
I love the ideas behind this.
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jaim_ee commented on the post, Microcosms 214 + The Karen Cox Prize for Entertaining Short Fiction (Flash Fiction Contest), on the site 1 year, 3 months ago
Very clever!
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jaim_ee commented on the post, Microcosms 214 + The Karen Cox Prize for Entertaining Short Fiction (Flash Fiction Contest), on the site 1 year, 3 months ago
Love love love. A perfectly captured fairytale in a micro
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jaim_ee commented on the post, Microcosms 213 + The Karen Cox Prize for Entertaining Short Fiction (Flash Fiction Contest), on the site 1 year, 3 months ago
Never team up with the other half!
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jaim_ee commented on the post, Microcosms 213 + The Karen Cox Prize for Entertaining Short Fiction (Flash Fiction Contest), on the site 1 year, 3 months ago
Brilliant and witty!
One of your best opening paragraphs ever!
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jaim_ee commented on the post, Microcosms 213 + The Karen Cox Prize for Entertaining Short Fiction (Flash Fiction Contest), on the site 1 year, 3 months ago
Thanks!!
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jaim_ee commented on the post, Microcosms 213 + The Karen Cox Prize for Entertaining Short Fiction (Flash Fiction Contest), on the site 1 year, 3 months ago
Don’t Be Off Your Guard In A Game Of Charades
238 words
Mime / Shark Attack / Comedy
By Jaime Bree
@jaim_ee_bree_________________________________________________
‘It’s a beetle.’
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‘A donkey?’
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‘No, hang on, hang on, I’ve got it… your grandma.’
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‘Ok. Possibly that was offensive. It’s…’
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‘In the…[Read more]
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jaim_ee commented on the post, Microcosms 212 + The Karen Cox Prize for Entertaining Short Fiction (Flash Fiction Contest), on the site 1 year, 4 months ago
Title: Just Desserts
300 words
Wedding Planner/Wine Cellar/Horror
@jaim_ee_bree
Yes, I am open to derivative works. Please contact me via one of the above channels for more information.____________________________________________________________________________________
‘Seriously? I told you I’m not going down there.’
‘It’s our job,…[Read more] - Load More
