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Firdaus commented on the post, Microcosms 79, on the site Microcosms 7 years, 3 months ago
Sorry I’m having trouble posting comments thus that obscure thing. I wanted to say that i can’t tell that it’s your first attempt at flash, you did pretty well. I liked that you kept the mystery around the woman […]
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Firdaus commented on the post, Microcosms 79, on the site Microcosms 7 years, 3 months ago
I liked the story. And it doe
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Firdaus commented on the post, Microcosms 79, on the site Microcosms 7 years, 3 months ago
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[Just for fun and since I’m already late I’ll break the word count rule. 450+ words I think.]
“Let’s put the band back together!” he said excitedly as he trapped the moment in his invention, wh […]
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Firdaus commented on the post, Microcosms 78, on the site Microcosms 7 years, 3 months ago
Hahaha Geoff that could happen right? Lol. You’re amazing. I’ll try to be on time next week. I’ve missed all the lovely people and their stories here. Thanks for your sweet words. 🙂
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Firdaus commented on the post, Microcosms 78, on the site Microcosms 7 years, 3 months ago
Darn I missed the deadline! I was travelling back in time. Next time maybe. Have been missing out on this for too long. Lovely entries.
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Firdaus commented on the post, Microcosms 68, on the site Microcosms 7 years, 5 months ago
Thank you Sian 🙂
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Firdaus commented on the post, Microcosms 68, on the site Microcosms 7 years, 5 months ago
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(295 words)Slipping away
I have forgotten my dog’s name, so I just call him Dog now. I’m surprised he actually responds to it. Maybe that was his name all along, I’m a little confused. Lately […]
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Firdaus commented on the post, Microcosms 64, on the site Microcosms 7 years, 6 months ago
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(300 words)Mr Reeder
“It was just another night, as always, dark and lonely. And then the murders began…”
I paused and looked up at him. His lips were drawn into a disapproving line. […]
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Firdaus commented on the post, Microcosms 61, on the site Microcosms 7 years, 7 months ago
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294 wordsA Walk to School
My feet sank into the thick layer of pine needles, as I trudged down the path winding through the woods. In the distance, I heard the warning bell for the school […]
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Firdaus commented on the post, Microcosms 59, on the site Microcosms 7 years, 7 months ago
Yes! haha…thank you.
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Firdaus commented on the post, Microcosms 59, on the site Microcosms 7 years, 7 months ago
thank you!
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Firdaus commented on the post, Microcosms 59, on the site Microcosms 7 years, 7 months ago
beautiful writing!
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Firdaus commented on the post, Microcosms 59, on the site Microcosms 7 years, 7 months ago
I’m having trouble commenting on the stories and thanking the ones who commented on mine. please know that i appreciate the kind feedback, thank you so much and I really enjoyed all the entries.
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Firdaus commented on the post, Microcosms 59, on the site Microcosms 7 years, 7 months ago
I loved how you described the whole scene, very vivid. Nice twist in the tail.
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Firdaus commented on the post, Microcosms 59, on the site Microcosms 7 years, 7 months ago
Fantastic story-telling. Loved it.
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Firdaus commented on the post, Microcosms 59, on the site Microcosms 7 years, 7 months ago
Beautiful writing.
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Firdaus commented on the post, Microcosms 59, on the site Microcosms 7 years, 7 months ago
Wow I didn’t expect that. Nice twist in the end.
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Firdaus commented on the post, Microcosms 59, on the site Microcosms 7 years, 7 months ago
I loved it. The last two lines-fantastic.
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Firdaus commented on the post, Microcosms 59, on the site Microcosms 7 years, 7 months ago
You painted such a beautiful picture and then broke my heart. So sad 🙁
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