Firdaus

Sorry I’m having trouble posting comments thus that obscure thing. I wanted to say that i can’t tell that it’s your first attempt at flash, you did pretty well. I liked that you kept the mystery around the woman […]

I liked the story. And it doe

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[Just for fun and since I’m already late I’ll break the word count rule. 450+ words I think.]

 “Let’s put the band back together!” he said excitedly as he trapped the moment in his invention, wh […]

Hahaha Geoff that could happen right? Lol. You’re amazing. I’ll try to be on time next week. I’ve missed all the lovely people and their stories here. Thanks for your sweet words. 🙂

Darn I missed the deadline! I was travelling back in time. Next time maybe. Have been missing out on this for too long. Lovely entries.

Thank you Sian 🙂

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(295 words)

Slipping away

I have forgotten my dog’s name, so I just call him Dog now. I’m surprised he actually responds to it. Maybe that was his name all along, I’m a little confused. Lately […]

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(300 words)

Mr Reeder

“It was just another night, as always, dark and lonely. And then the murders began…”

I paused and looked up at him. His lips were drawn into a disapproving line. […]

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294 words

A Walk to School

My feet sank into the thick layer of pine needles, as I trudged down the path winding through the woods. In the distance, I heard the warning bell for the school […]

Yes! haha…thank you.

thank you!

whoops!

beautiful writing!

I’m having trouble commenting on the stories and thanking the ones who commented on mine. please know that i appreciate the kind feedback, thank you so much and I really enjoyed all the entries.

I loved how you described the whole scene, very vivid. Nice twist in the tail.

Fantastic story-telling. Loved it.

Beautiful writing.

Wow I didn’t expect that. Nice twist in the end.

I loved it. The last two lines-fantastic.

You painted such a beautiful picture and then broke my heart. So sad 🙁