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Danny Beusch commented on the post, Microcosms 105, on the site Microcosms 6 years, 11 months ago
Some really beautiful lines 🙂
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Danny Beusch commented on the post, Microcosms 105, on the site Microcosms 6 years, 11 months ago
Really liked your use of the chosen line. Felt like a natural fit 🙂
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Danny Beusch commented on the post, Microcosms 105, on the site Microcosms 6 years, 11 months ago
Sing
by Danny Beusch
@OhDannyBoyShhh
#101, #102
250 wordsSun-loving drinkers buzz noisily outside the city centre bars. Inside, away from the light, it’s like a dungeon. ‘Usual?’ the barman asks, passi […]
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Danny Beusch commented on the post, Microcosms 87, on the site Microcosms 7 years, 3 months ago
Really creepy. I know that tale is going to stick with me. Great work 🙂
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Danny Beusch commented on the post, Microcosms 87, on the site Microcosms 7 years, 3 months ago
Dark and light – loved it 🙂
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Danny Beusch commented on the post, Microcosms 87, on the site Microcosms 7 years, 3 months ago
Bed, Flat, Memoir
220 words
@OhDannyBoyShhhPowder your Nose
Rehab: the hardest thing I’ve ever done. After we got clean, my parents were so happy that they paid the deposit on our new flat. A fresh s […]
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Danny Beusch commented on the post, Microcosms 71, on the site Microcosms 7 years, 6 months ago
‘a language in morse code’ – love it! 🙂
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Danny Beusch commented on the post, Microcosms 71, on the site Microcosms 7 years, 6 months ago
@ohdannyboyshhh
243 words
Walk On By / CrimeTelling Tales
He split up with me by text. The usual crap. But just two weeks later he was strutting through town hand-in-hand with another woman. He was far […]
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Danny Beusch commented on the post, RESULTS – Microcosms 67, on the site Microcosms 7 years, 7 months ago
Thank you so much. Really glad you enjoyed it!
New to flash fiction and have found everyone so encouraging and welcoming!
Danny
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Danny Beusch commented on the post, Microcosms 67, on the site Microcosms 7 years, 7 months ago
Very vivid – I could picture it all so clearly.
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Danny Beusch commented on the post, Microcosms 67, on the site Microcosms 7 years, 7 months ago
Not an easy task to weave a farmer into an urban slum. Great job.
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Danny Beusch commented on the post, Microcosms 67, on the site Microcosms 7 years, 7 months ago
The break in the story is really effective – great way to contrast crime/atonement.
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Danny Beusch commented on the post, Microcosms 67, on the site Microcosms 7 years, 7 months ago
Danny Beusch
@OhDannyBoyShhh
288 words
Pianist/Warsaw/CrimeThe Piano Lesson
They all repulse me, but none more so than Jakob. Learning an instrument requires discipline, a quality entirely absent from my […]
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