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Ashley Gardana commented on the post, RESULTS – Microcosms 82, on the site Microcosms 7 years, 4 months ago
Congrats everyone! 😀
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Ashley Gardana commented on the post, Microcosms 82, on the site Microcosms 7 years, 4 months ago
Loved the format and rhyming scheme on this. Great job!
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Ashley Gardana commented on the post, Microcosms 82, on the site Microcosms 7 years, 4 months ago
From the Ashes
124 wordsPoet/Plantation/Memoir
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The pages in her hand were red. Everyone she knew was dead.
Jill traced the words, the ink a raised texture against her finger, […]
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Ashley Gardana commented on the post, Microcosms 26, on the site Microcosms 8 years, 5 months ago
Thank you!
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Ashley Gardana commented on the post, Microcosms 26, on the site Microcosms 8 years, 5 months ago
Lost in a Cave
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300 words
Wizard/Cave/Adventure“Merlin’s beard!”
“Yes?” the man grasped at his mane of white, wispy hair. He pulled it to his eye for inspection. “What about it?”
My […]
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Ashley Gardana commented on the post, Microcosms 21, on the site Microcosms 8 years, 6 months ago
Thank you for the feedback. I appreciate the tip!
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Ashley Gardana commented on the post, Microcosms 21, on the site Microcosms 8 years, 6 months ago
Bah – the ninth line should read: “After that we knew” to go with the 5/8/5/3 syllable count I decided to painfully put myself through. 😀
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Ashley Gardana commented on the post, Microcosms 21, on the site Microcosms 8 years, 6 months ago
The Clown Murderer – an Origins Story:
In a dark corner
of an equally dark mansion
swung a framed portrait
of a clown.
No one could recall
when it arrived in the corner
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Ashley Gardana commented on the post, RESULTS – Microcosms 20, on the site Microcosms 8 years, 6 months ago
Congrats everyone!
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Ashley Gardana commented on the post, Microcosms 18, on the site Microcosms 8 years, 7 months ago
Thanks! I’m not quite sure how to edit though…
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Ashley Gardana commented on the post, Microcosms 18, on the site Microcosms 8 years, 7 months ago
Prime Ape
The apes part as he walks through the Valley (or, what passed as a valley in this shit-hole of a zoo.) Once, he had a pack of thousands. Now, he had five idiots and a two-way mirror. “They” didn’t t […]
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Ashley Gardana commented on the post, Microcosms 17, on the site Microcosms 8 years, 7 months ago
I laughed aloud at, “You’re not even human.” Great job!
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Ashley Gardana commented on the post, Microcosms 17, on the site Microcosms 8 years, 7 months ago
Polycarbonate
Behind this helmet of polycarbonate,
each breath warms my face,
the condensation bubbles like droplets,
and I remember;
I miss the rain.Beyond this helmet of polycarbonate,
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Ashley Gardana became a registered member 8 years, 8 months ago
